These are the first three beauty shots. Unfortunately I didn't use my favorite shot, because it just had too much of the sky, and not enough of the environment.
Why I picked this shot: I loved the composition of the fence pulling you into the marketplace, and how he pull of the red wall to the left, and the fence in the back oppose each other. I choose to make a small marketplace because I just wanted the challenge of making it believable.
Critique notes: The eggs are flatly shaded (I will play around with the torch lighting to help fix that), the eggs should all be on the same side of the fence, the lighting on the shops does not look like it is coming from the torches, add more clusters of the same props.
This is my sacrificial vista. I know that in Aztec culture that they sacrificed people on top of the temples, but I could not resist the opportunity for a sacrifice overlooking a giant canyon, where they can throw the bodies over the ledge to the dinosaurs below.
Critique: Too much fire near the sacrificial stone on the back, needs blood to help the narrative, change the fire to another option we had (it's less saturated), get rid of the torch in the front.
Lastly, my giant rib cage of doom. In this shot you can see my building kit, and at least a sample of every prop I have made. (pots, bones, iconography).
Critique notes: the coulomb holding the gate up (to the left) is flatly shaded (fix my adjusting the camera), the pots in the front are distracting, the gate is visually confusing as to how it operates. Add more of my iconography blocks to the red wall.
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